Hi John,
Thanks for your interesting comments which are very constructive.

The chord structure of verse and chorus are similar but not identical and solo is different again but I do agree that each part does have similar chord structure. I think I agree that having a more distinct chord structure for the verse would have made it stand out more.

I like your description of the guitar in the solos as "bee in a jam jar". It is rather harsh - put it through ampliTube2 - easy to make it more mellow.

The title comes in on the second part of the chorus after the solo - I think that is okay.

Thanks for listening John and pleased you saw possibilities in the song. I will work on the chord structure and the choruses modulating into a different chord.

Jim