Hi Rob,

It's been a while since your last time here, as I can recall.
Nice to see/hear you're back. And with a nice song!
I like how you sing her name out during the chorus, stretched...

I have some little remarks;
at the end of the song your singing stopped a bit abruptly
and maybe a transposion or a break/bridge in the song is something to think about (?)

But as a whole; very nice song
Goed gedaan, Rob!

Fijne dag,
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130