Hi James,

I can recall you wrote not wanting to make these kind of songs anymore. I wrote back that these songs are so characteristic of you, or similair words. And here you are again with another very sensitive song with very good lyrics!
Only your singing sounds clearer every time (despite the sad story), so that's some progress you made in time.

I had to smile a bit about the 'cheatty' rhyme you used:
...of you, somehow,
And he tries so hard not to forget you ... you know ...

The way you pronounced 'you know' came close to 'somehow'. That was very nice!

So take Martys' advise and stay on the forum for creative ideas and be a young man...

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130