Originally Posted By: bloc-head
I love this.
Excellent... top to bottom, start to finish...

Thanks, bloc-head.

Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Good one, Marty, man, you are such a good writer! Vocal turned out great too.

I really liked this comment, Dave. But --see below.

Originally Posted By: PROJECT M
Hello Marty
great song
Very nice melody
In addition a very good singing
Your songs are always very different.
that's exactly what I like about your music
Great work
Many greetings
Andi ;-)

Thanks, Andi. Appreciate that, man.

Originally Posted By: CaptainMoto
Sounds like the stomach flu agrees with you smile

Don't take it back, I like it.

moto

Haha. Cool comment, Moto. Thanks.

Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Marty,

This is a very nice sad (ex-) lovesong!
I loved it from the start, mainly because I always like this kind of chord progressions that force one into singing heartbraking things.
And you did that with the right touch in your vocals!

But I also had to laugh about Dave wrote:
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Good one, Marty, man, you are such a good writer! Vocal turned out great too.

because that writing brought you into trouble!!!

I was thinking if it could have been nice if you sang this song in a collaboration with Deej. He has that tremelo you were trying to achive. Both your voices could sound great in the chorusses, don't you think?
But without his vocals I still enjoyed your song a lot!
Is she back yet?

Hans


Thanks, Hans. Good suggestion about asking Deej. I love his voice. But I'll admit I'm confused about what you're saying about Dave's comment...

...and this didn't help me understand:

Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude


haha, yeah, you are right, Hans. I should have said lyricist, not writer eek

Thanks, Dave. But are you saying I'm not very good at writing the music part? hehe

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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