Hi Dewey,

A very nice song, good performance and strong lyrics and vocals!
But I can agree with Ray. I think your song can use some 'surprises', although I also enjoyed it the way it is.
So, to use the title of Marty Straubs' song; now you have 'mixed signals'

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130