Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Wrong to write ... mega cool.

A new and clever take on remorse.

And we get to see the sentimental side of Babu.

Fine vocal, bass, and mix --- no surprises there smile

Well done in both the audio and video departments!

J&B

I like that "clever take on remorse." Thanks for everything, J&B.

Originally Posted By: Scott C
Loved the vocal Marty. Delicate delivery. So appropriate for your lyric. Excellent story telling. So much emotion. Lovely backtrack to frame vocal. the intro and guitar break was excellent as well.

The soundcloud version sounded my better than the youtube link.

Thanks, Scott. Yes, unfortunately YT really compresses the track, and sometimes the video distracts appreciation of the music. Thanks for your comments!!

Originally Posted By: jannesan
Lyrics with wit and emotion. It was right to write such a beautiful ballad. I really enjoyed the mourning and regret in your voice. The cello gives nice depth to the mood. Excellent solo writes all the right notes.

Janne

Thanks, Janne. Glad you notice the regret and mourning. Yeah, that subtle cello seems to make a loud statement to me, too.

Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Marty,
Super tune. Sad, yet listens very easy. Excellent vocals. Clever progression. Mix is top notch. Some good things come out even out of stomach flu...Who knew. Liked it! Thank you for sharing.

Misha.

P.S. I need some of those vitamins you are taking.

Thanks, Misha. Yes, the stomach flu gave it that edge of sleeplessness caused by crying or something.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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