Interesting.
The "personal journey/meditation" references set me up for something less aggressive, less angry, less dismissive and more compassionate than the lyric combined with music offer.
I also expected you to play bass but you've opted for BIAB to do that.
There're a lot of "slant/imperfect rhymes" in the text some work well other seem a little forced.

A solid song, the band is well augmented by your input - giving some more life and colour.
The video was disappointing. I had thought it'd be something else I suppose but a lyric video is fine and dandy.
You should pots this in the User Showcase section. You'll get more views and comments there.
I would suggest you visit prior to posting and listen/comment on a few people's work so you set yourself up for success.

Last edited by rayc; 05/24/22 02:06 PM.
Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe