Hi Floyd,

I enjoyed your heartbraking song a lot! And I read all the posts on it and can only admit what was written.
You are at your very, very best with these heartbraking themes. Like it's your own personal experience.
You are -to me- a master on these kind of lyrics.
Nothing I just wrote is new to you. I wrote most of it before (except that 'master' thing)...

I almost forgot to mention how I liked the chorusses and harmonies with Janice. They sound so powerfull. A golden choice!

I conclude, quoting a comment from Dave: Top notch!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
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