Hello Brian,

I enjoyed your song very much and also the original focus in the lyrics.
Your vocals are very nice. The melody gives a feeling of 'weightlessness' by the airy way you sing it.

I only have a small comment about the composition. You have many 'holds' or breaks in your song. 'Less is best' I think. Otherwise the flow in your song suffers a bit.
But it still is a pleasant song!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130