Hi Elliott,

"...I want to live in paradise and live more than survive..." well I think no one will disagree with that, I'm sure!

You made a nice tropical song, with the swell sounding steelband. I used that instrument as well lately in 'the ocean'.
I think you got the 'island- mood'with this one.
Good vocals, a bit sad lyrics, but at the same time it also sounds pretty happy. That's a good mix!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130