This has a Kris Kristofferson feel to it. A really strong vibe in there.

Nicely done.

I could hear the band kicking in on the second verse. But that's minor issue of differing production values.

I enjoyed the song.... nice modulation and loved the ending surprise chords.

I'm always careful what I ask for..... He might give you what you ask but not in the way that you're thinking.

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The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.