James, your spoken word and vocals are the best you have done to date

Personally I can't think of a thing that would improve this song

I loved that chord progression

Great work here

Loved it


Doc-take it easy John this is just a sharp scalpel. It will not cut deep so don't worry.
Me-I'm not John
Doc-I know, I am!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware