James, your spoken word and vocals are the best you have done to date

Personally I can't think of a thing that would improve this song

I loved that chord progression

Great work here

Loved it


OK, a random thought;
Why does toilet paper need a commercial? Who's not buying it?

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware