Hey Brad...first off I like the concept and delivery...I too agree with Ray...IMO I would bring the band up slightly and then put a PINCH of reverb on the entire mix to try to put the whole band (including you) in the same space with the same room ambience...that's just me for what it's worth...the "But" problem in line five could be dealt with by just deleting the "But"...I think that might work...as usual a heartfelt and very good write...a tweek or two would polish it nicely...anyway that's my 2 cents worth...keep'em comin'!


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