Marty,
the vocal is ace...perfectly placed in the mix and room.
Dave's playing is, as always, in the service of the song but also terrific in & of itself.
You "did the bass" as usual - spot on.
This could've been calypso, reggae, country but is at home as a bluesy ballad.
The F6 was worth the effort.
My partner of 39 years (married for 37) has her birthday on 17th August. I'm not so bold as to write a song of/for her...for a start, she doesn't much like my music, has a better ear than me & I don't write sincerity the way you do.
In other words - excellent lyric.


Cheers
rayc
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