"Don't raise me on a wall
'cause I would have to fall"

Yes, it is clunky in English.
Pedestal wouldn't work as it's pronounced pede stl and to make it rhyme you'd have to torture the last syllable into stall.

"Don't hang me on a wall" would be closer to a fit but is still problematic unless your name is Arthur.
"Don't raise me up at all"
There're a few rhymes for all but not many come within the scope of your text.

"they all suck and are just for the fools" is also a bit clunky.

Nice lyric idea.


Last edited by rayc; 07/31/22 10:59 AM.
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