I had no issue understanding the meaning of the words. I don't think there is any logical reason to require anyone to use formal ways of using any language.

It is very common when living in Europe to hear mistakes made by non-native speakers. There are a lot of languages in close proximity. Here in the United States, it is more a question of dialects but in some areas, English is not the primary language.

I liked everything about the song. I think as time goes forward, this virtual world will become very commonplace.

As an artist, I think it is your job to create your version of art and it is our job to interpret the meaning.

My guess is that the future will be a collaborative effort between artists of different types. It is pretty difficult to be highly skilled in all the parts needed. In fact, this is what is going on in major film studios.

The really cool thing is that you have been able to create both music and video. Good stuff!

Billy

Just an afterthought. Here is a link to a list of songs that have no discernable meaning in the words used. So your minor deviation should be totally understandable to anyone. Using non-standard language in music is a common device.

https://www.bbc.co.uk/music/articles/2d67dd79-7603-46ef-ba55-b46cd2884f8b

Who would consider this very understandable? Yet it is considered great poetry.

The force that through the green fuse drives the flower
Drives my green age; that blasts the roots of trees
Is my destroyer.
And I am dumb to tell the crooked rose
My youth is bent by the same wintry fever.

Last edited by Planobilly; 08/06/22 05:05 PM.
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