Originally Posted By: rayc
Beady,
Yes it reads better.
Well done is seeking and accepting guidance without giving up your own ideas.

I have to thank YOU for your constructive feedback, it helped a lot.
And even in cases where I might have a completely different opinion I always re-evaluate my point of view. Makes me understand my own approach better.

BTW, if it would not be the song title AND the main hook I might probably have kept the original lyrics (after all, nobody complained about Roger Waters' "And everything is green and submarine").

But, to be honest, I don't have the balls for that...yet grin