The chorus really gives this song a chance to be something special. However, the production just isn't very good.

Sundance is my new favorite critiquer -- listen to her, she is giving the straight scoop.

Very midi sounding at the start and the vocal mix as well as the those panning effects (starting at ~0:32) are not working at all. The heavy reverb on the lead vox is not modern sounding. You need to find an unbiased producer to help you out.

Kevin


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