Vic, I think this is a great sad song. You're right, there are a lot of places like this around with a lot of people in them, and I think the lyrics really connect with that atmosphere. It's hard to imagine this as a comedy song. I have no idea what your alternative bridge was, but I sue like what you've got here. I found myself wondering what it may have sounded like if the tempo was a little bit faster with perhaps a little more instrumentation. I think that's just a style thing though. Very good song.

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