That made me nervous just reading about the challenge. I give you a lot of credit for taking up the challenge and producing something. I thought what you ended up with is fine and I liked the metaphor of talking rain. The vocal is not sitting in the mix, and that is a big problem for my ears. If you can work on that and repost, that would be my recommendation. Again, kudos for taking on the challenge!


Windows 11, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 2i2, Sony Acid Music Studio 10, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak