Hey, Alan,

Thank you. Yeah, this particular song was an assignment for a lyric-writing course, so I felt I had to follow the rules of the assignment which was to use rhymes. I don't know what happened in the third verse -- I think kind of lost track of what I was aiming for. The lyrics in the final version probably worked better in the long run. I also changed the music to something less upbeat, but I think I prefer this version as far as the music goes.

Wow! Japan in the 60s must have been interesting. I first arrived here in 1976. It was quite a different place then than it is now. Were you here with the military?

Cheers!

Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hey Alan ...

Welcome to the forum. there's just one letter difference in out names ... I'm Alan David.

A very strong 80s sound that's well presented. Each lyricist feels the lyric in his/her own way. And I'm fine with that. No lyrical problem from m y POV. Very nice use of the BIAN Real Tracks! It's a great introductory song - looking to hear more from you.

I've been to Japan twice ... but many years ago ... in the 60s and again in the 70s. Loved it!

Welcome aboard and hope you stay and give us some more listening pleasure.

Alan