Originally Posted By: B.D.Thomas
The sparse arrangement leaves a lot of room for your voice, and dude, did you use this. Wonderful!

But what I like even more are the lyrics...not what you sing, but what you explicitly did not sing.
You tell a story which leaves a lot of room for interpretation, each listener can make up his own story from that.

That are the ingredients for a song that lasts...


Thanks, B. D.


Originally Posted By: firesong
Floyd...your production and arrangements always match the particular song you're doing so well...and this is no exception...but for me it was the lyric...the second verse is so poignant and perfect...it captures the heart of the song and the angst of the teller of the story...bravo! Beautiful song, exquisitely written, and delivered so well! Congrats to you and Michael.


Thanks, Dan. Mike deserves a lot of credit for the lyric here.


Originally Posted By: Ghostgum
A skillfully written song. A perfectly understated backing with a masterful performance to match.


Thanks, Brian...