No you didn't mess up to badly.

You did a great job on the rhythm, super cool groove.

You also are coming along very well on the bass.

I do agree with Deej 56 in that the intro is to long.

You have super groove backing tracks going on but IMHO it lacks a lead. I would take your sitar and play a lead over this. Remember this is only my opinion and others may or may not agree.

Super groove and bass.


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