Ok ... updated. I bumped it up from F# to G (I thought I had it in F at first but ... anyway, bumped it up because my voice could handle another half step, it puts it in G so it'll be easy for me to play on the git-tar, and it puts me closer to the coveted Steve Perry Range). Then I completely redid the vocals with some new "feelz", taking some of Ray's advice, suppressing the piano during the vocals and adding some variety to the "chorus" ... which amounts to the word "fissure". Also toned down the rerverb a tad.

I did a cover of Ace's "How Long" once, and I saw someone comment on ... in the outtro, Paul Carack never sang the phrase twice quite the same way.

First one is the updated track, the second is what I uploaded last night. (in the post above)

For convenience, here's the new version, same link as the original was (before I changed it).

https://soundcloud.com/phil-leith/fissure

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOzvI6BuTdI