Originally Posted By: Deej56
Phil,

Love the tune (listening to the revised version). The mix sounds good to me. Nice write and solid vocal. If I had one suggestion (and it's a small subjective one), it might be to dial down the volume just a tad when singing "Fissure"--just to soften it a bit. But that's an artistic preference at best--trust your gut on that one.

My very best to you,

Deej


I agree with Deej about the volume of "Fissure". Personally, I would also sing it slightly less sustained.

Apart from that, definitely a good song!

Rob


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