Even before the harmonies began, the song had a grab-me feel. I'm a full-fledged fan, Dan. I know what you mean about age robbing us of the high notes. My range is at least a step and a half lower than when younger.

Ok. There they are. The harmonies are correct, of course, but they have a strange, unnatural sound sometimes. I did a similar thing once (The Price) and still cringe if I hear it. There might be a better way to use Melodyne and I know others do it justice, but for now I lower the key or get someone else to help. I use Melodyne mostly to reduce the vibrato of my voice and also to help with the sibilance; then just to be sure certain important notes are at least close to pitch.

On the other hand, this is a great song, dude.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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