Nice work.

I like that raspy character in your voice. Kind of like a Rod Stewart thing.

Good job on the writing as well as the use of the tracks.

I prefer to use my own guitar parts but there's been a few times when due to one of several reasons/excuses, I opted to simply use the RTs and get it done.

I enjoyed the song.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.