Originally Posted By: Dewey_MI
Good job Herb! Love the lyrics and it's a supercool hook. The guitar thread is rocking too.

The only suggestion I have - and this is a personal thing - my ear expected a more consistent rhyming scheme and to have the line before the hook in the chorus rhyme with America. Again, it's just my opinion; regardless, I really liked this one.

Na zdrowie!


Thanks for listening and commenting.

Have a listen to this and let me know what you think about the rhyme scheme in it. https://soundcloud.com/guitarhacker/love-that-woman

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