I really liked the intro, lyrics, and build up after intro.
and the way instruments came in gradually.

very very nice singing.

imho as an ex choirboy mate i feel this definitely should
receive major MAJOR radio play on various religious radio stations.

a really great job.
i applaud your talent.

happiness.

om

my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)