Hi Michee,
Thanks for your comments and pleased you liked it.
Yes good suggestion about lyric change - I could also use
"The sky's the limit as we fly high as a kite
Either would make it easier to sing
I updated the version to
http://www.box.net/shared/5o2u903xmpto correct vocal timing in very last part. This timing seems to have crept in from using the melodyne plugin for pitch correction so I took it off for this part as their were no problems with pitch. I think it is improved in this new version.
I also called the song "It feels so right" to take account of what jon said.
Thanks Michee for listening and commenting - much appreciated.
Jim