James,

Well, you know I like those heartbreak songs, so this was a sweet listen. The vocal sits really nice in the mix . . . wondering if a little more reverb on it would be helpful. Like the music backing to this . . . not sure which guitar is doing those little runs, walk-ups and downs, but it’s nice when it hits. Dreamy poetic write . . . well done! “Musical narrator” . . . yeah, that describes it really well.

My very best to you,

Deej