Hello Floyd, TuneMonger and Ray,

Of course I am a little slow in replying, but I had an excuse; got ill on severall days. Think because of the bad weather or the war in Ukrain, or whatever.

Floy posted this:
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Hans,

Vocals sound good. BGVs, too.
Instruments are crisp and clean.
Good arrangement.
A good sound. Good mix.
Solid.

fj


I really liked what you wrote, Floyd! I was a bit afraid some tuning wasn't right, because working with Ozone 10 needed some practise. Thanks.

And TuneMonger wrote:
Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Hey Hans, you have your own style that shows through on any song you present here. This song reminded me of the movie "Laura." If you like noir, it's a good film. Vocals sound great on this. Lyrics have that mildly enigmatic quality you usually have. Glad you're back, so sorry about your cat. Hope he's okay.


I didn't see 'Laura' but it must have been amazing ;-) And yes, I think noir movies I like, but only when followed by some funny stuff!
I was intrigued by what wrote about the lyrics, but I like using metaphors in my writing. And the cat: never heard of him since. A tragedy, or maybe I'm too weak. People often say; "well, it's only a cat". But thanks for your compliments and attention.

And there was Ray:
Originally Posted By: rayc
Welkom terug meneer,
A terrific song to drop in with.
It made me think about the many pronunciations of "portrait" amongst other things.
Your voice is cool - it seems to have far less processing or, at least, far less obvious processing.
Dit is een goede!

This was popular when I was a teen...


Oh Ray, I knew you had Dutch roots (or maybe it was Google translate). I listened back to my pronouncation of all the portraits ,but they sounded more or less the same. But I have no English roots, of course! About the processing; the song had taken me longer than any other song. And it did well, I notice.
Oh, and thanks for sending that very long australian song about the cat. I loved the story. But what a long song for that time!


Have a very nice day,
Hans

Last edited by Birchwood; 10/06/22 12:40 AM.
Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
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