Originally Posted By: jannesan
I liked this song from the first beat, so the instrumentation and the intro really show strong life. Your vocal is very strong keeping the song high on the sky near the moon and never falling. Kind of Johnny Cash meets U2 mood. The chord progression is very nice and keeps the interest without a chorus. The fretless bass works very well and so does the held guitar, I don't like some notes the cello is playing, but otherwise it works as well highlighting the sadness and the rain in the lyrics.

Janne


Janne, Thanks much for your commentary. I'll have a closer listen to the cello.

Originally Posted By: Dewey_MI
Great job building the instrumentation and tension in the song!


Thank you, Dewey!