Bob,

Cool opening.
MAN! Those drums are KILLER!

The "tell me that you love me" vocal is appropriately creepy! It works.

The vocal works perfectly for the subject matter. It would be nice if you could rid it of the boom-i-ness.

A very cool song AND a very cool performance. (worth "fixing" that boomy thing)

"And if there's a world awaiting
Some reward I don't deserve
Keep a bit of love for me
In good preserve"

Wordsmith.

Like it.

fj