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Terrific vocal performance...it could use a tiny bit of EQing to reduce some of the strident tones on the more aggressive sounds. I'm not fussed on the effect on the acoustic but the band is cool and supports your narrative & voice well.
Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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catchy chorus. and i really like your character vocals.
i hear some bgv's in this but thats just me.
really nice lyrics.
very nice song.
om OM, sorry for this silly question but what are bgv's?
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Terrific vocal performance...it could use a tiny bit of EQing to reduce some of the strident tones on the more aggressive sounds. I'm not fussed on the effect on the acoustic but the band is cool and supports your narrative & voice well. Ray, Do you mean my vocals need EQing? I think some of the parts are too loud and others too soft, volume wise. Therefore, I was going to do some pre-fx volume trim surgery to even them out more. Would this fix what you are talking about or are you saying it's more of a treble or bass issue? Dewey
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That’s a powerful performance! Passionate vocal, good track selection and mix. The sweet lyric really hit home with us. I (Bud) almost moved to the other side of the country years before I met Janice and we often talk about how we would have “found” each other somehow someway! Enjoyed it! J&B
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Terrific vocal performance...it could use a tiny bit of EQing to reduce some of the strident tones on the more aggressive sounds. I'm not fussed on the effect on the acoustic but the band is cool and supports your narrative & voice well. Ray, Do you mean my vocals need EQing? I think some of the parts are too loud and others too soft, volume wise. Therefore, I was going to do some pre-fx volume trim surgery to even them out more. Would this fix what you are talking about or are you saying it's more of a treble or bass issue? Dewey Probably - in some syllables things get a little aggressive and adjusting levels is a best 1st option rather than EQ.
Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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Hi Dewey ...
What a great song! Everything about this is just so good. As previously mentioned, your higher regiuster is suimply awesome. Nice backing tracks.
No suggestions from that would help - just keep posting and I'll keep listening. Really nice work here!
Alan
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Hello Dewey,
Like all others I was blown away by your vocals and the hight of them. Very lovely melody. So; triple A!!!
Till your next one, Hans
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Great song, I really like how the title, the lyrics and the vocals are combined into a seamless and sincere composition. Very good singing, especially the chorus gives me shivers, I really like the vibrato in your voice.
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Hi Dewey Cool song Really well sung Your voice is very cool anyway Maybe you should be a little bit braver with the drums and Bass But in any case a great job Many greetings Andi ;-)
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Really cool concept!!! The melody is great and the vocal is passionate and heartfelt!! The only change I would make is cut out "to do" since the "you" in "found you" still rhymes but I think the lyric is more natural that way. Really cool song!!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks for all the feedback everyone! I had many suggestions regarding lyrics, production, melody, and mixing to improve this song from both folks in this forum and members in my NSAI chapter and reviewed them all. After sifting through it all I finalized this version that I put onto YouTube. Again, thank you all for your input and kind words! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ffc0furuY8
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Yep, that worked wonders. Great song - all the way around.
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I'm bumping this song for being my favorite Showcase tune of 2022. I play it all the time. Great song sung superbly.
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Man - I thought your voice was going to crack wide open but you held it together and then the vibrato kicked in and it just opened right up - a joy to listen to - good supporting track and well constructed throughout - goodonya
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Your vocal performance in the chorus gives me goosebumps. Awesome!
Thanks Rob for bumping the song!
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If you've reviewed our Support page, you've probably noticed the Videos page, which separates our Band-in-a-Box® tutorial videos by category: Overview, VST DAW Plugin, Setup, Beginner, Intermediate, Advanced, and there's even an Archive category to go down memory lane... (You'll also find these videos on our YouTube Channel.)
It's always great to hear how other Band-in-a-Box® users create their songs, especially when they explain in detail what they're doing. Like Henry Clarke's YouTube Channel, Henry Clarke - Senior Musicians Unite! There you'll find his ALL Band-in-a-Box Tutorials playlist with over 50 videos! His top-three most watched videos include "How to Get Started with Band-in-a-Box," "How I use the Audio Chord Wizard in Band-in-a-Box," and "How to Create An Effective Solo Using Band-in-a-Box" - however he touches on many other topics and also demonstrates his own Band-in-a-Box® songs in the Band-in-a-Box Created Songs playlist!
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We wanted to demonstrate how this is done with our video, where we show you how to go from nothing to a finished "radio ready" modern pop song by combining the features of Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V!
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