Hi Bob ...

Now, that's some creative writing and production! Those drums arte truly the heartbeat of the composition - excellent! Your vocal is quite good for the song. perhasps a slight more mid EQ would would really frame it in a superb light. As I said, the vocal is perfect for the song and that small EQ tweak might be worth considering.

All the backing tracks work - good choices and nicely mixed. That was a really cool-ghoul listen! A project well-done.

Alan


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