Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Scott,

Your wife surely likes this one now! This sounds really good Scott! I wouldn't worry much about it not having a "chorus", plenty of great songs didn't have one either...Hey Jude, Thunder Road, Bohemian Rhapsody etc. I thought it was great!

Thanks, Torrey


Torrey, thank you for your kind assessment. Thank means a lot.

Originally Posted By: musician17
Excellent song. Shades of Johnny Cash. The repetition of the two note motif makes one remember and listen to what is being sung. And the lyrics are top notch. I particularly like the alternation of "this time" (or "that time") with "not this time" in between verses, and the implication of this alternation missing altogether in the final verse.

In short: I loved it. Well done.


James, thanks for looking the analysis of the lyrics. I spent a lot of time revising them.

Originally Posted By: PROJECT M
Hi Scott
Great song
Very interesting played
Top sung
Sounds very cool Scott
Many greetings
Andi ;-)


Thanks so much, Andi!

Originally Posted By: Derochette
hi Ezekiel's Storm

Nice atmosphere. Your voice lends itself well to your lyrics. The discreet but very present cello reinforces the atmosphere. A refrain would have been superfluous in this composition. Well done

Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash


Derochette, Thank you. I couldn't think of any place where a chorus (or bridge) would fit, so I left it as is.