Natalie reminds me indeed of Karen Carpenter, and Karen is one of my all-time favorite singers....
As strange as this sentence may sound, I really need to try out Natalie grin

I like the song, a chorus would be nice, but it's not really necessary, the song works pretty well as it is now.
Arrangement and production are also pretty good, nothing to complain about here.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
I also managed to make the usual mistake of writing all my ideas into the first verse, and still didn't have anything to put into the chorus!

I know this all too well... my workaround for this is to sing along with the verse, and sooner or later I find the melody for the chorus, and once I have that, the lyrics come automatically.

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