David,

I agree with others that this is a very nice production with a wonderfully, soothing vocal performance. Regarding the melody, my ear was ready to hear a change to a chorus where the third stanza currently resides. Really lifting up that first line might be something to consider.

Regarding the rhyme, scheme: You have pieces that might work together already (just an example, not meant to be a rewrite).

Catch me, 'cause I'm falling
Lost just like a child
Feel safe and warm
In the comfort of your smile

Again, I really enjoyed the soothing sounds of this one and my suggestions are, well..., exactly that, just suggestions.

Na zdrowie!