You know, I really enjoy your writing style, David. The first listen was wonderful background for pleasant reading. With your help I'm learning different synth voices. When you suggested Eleanor Forte, I was with you, and I' with you on using Natalie. So good. Man, you got me with the title. Curiouser and curiouser I read about Alice. The song is so lilting and aurally pleasing that I'd never notice there is no rhyme scheme and still don't. As far as song structure, this song is better without it --afterall it is Forever July.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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