Hi, Mario.

I liked the song, but all together? It sounded like players rehearsing a song they never saw before, so each was focusing on their parts, but not really paying attention to each other. They never hit a groove, and the dynamics didn't feel like they were in sync.

For example, the drum would put in a nice fill, but so did the keys. They were both good ideas, but they didn't match up together.

You've got each instrument in its own space, and each seems to have its own reverb as well. But there's nothing gluing them together.

There's a huge amount of reverb on the keys, and the reverb tail is so loud, it's distracting.

The soprano sax sounds like it's struggling to play in tune. It's also placed further back in the mix, so the keys and drums are in front of it.

Each instrument is so separated that each and every sound - be it from the drum, keys, or bass - demands attention. Putting the sax in front and the other instruments in supporting roles might fix it. I'm too much a pea-brained dinosaur to listen to more than one idea at a time! wink

Wow, do I sound negative! I did like the song!

Anyway, just some thoughts that I could be completely wrong about, feel free to ignore!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?