Sorry, David, I thought you inserted question marks to ask for constructive criticism. My advice always come from the "pitchable" angle, because that is what I strive for. As I said before, I really did enjoy this song though.
I appreciated the feedback!
As I was working on the song, I hit a point where I had to decide if I was going to keep going down the current path, or start ripping up stuff and making it more commercial and pop.
I'm pretty happy with the end result, but I wanted to acknowledge what I
didn't do - create a pop song. As you pointed out, the options were there if I wanted to take them!
Thanks again!
