Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
WOW!

“a fool seldom knows what a fool he's been

until it's far too late and the verdict is in”

The lyric is so good and the imagery from daily life just grabs the listener in how profound the absence of those little things can be.

Your vocal, no surprise, is killer and could “rip the paint right off your heart.” (Janice looked at me and said, “just listen to his voice!”) The prosody is excellent also.

You seem to effortlessly master any genre with your selection of tracks and your production.

Our hats are off to you, mr. jane!

J&B


Y'all are too kind... smile


Originally Posted By: Derochette
Hi floyd jane,

Very captivating sentimental song. Your lyrics are well written. You manage to make us feel your emotions. It's well done. I appreciated.

Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash


Thanks, Derochette...


Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Floyd,

Great write
Great vocals
Great arrangement
Great use of the third-party stuff

Another really good sounding tune from you! Enjoyed it!

Thanks, Torrey


Much appreciated, Torrey....

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