Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Scott/Robert,

Out-of-this-world lyric! smile Good vocal.

Cool tracks. Very nice backing. Cool sounds.

Nice guitar work, Scott.

Good mix.

fj


Thanks Floyd. Your comments are very much appreciated. Thanks for the comments on the mix. I have been working very hard on this part of my music skills.


Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Very cool lyrics! Good vocals, guitar, and a great sounding track.

Nicely done you two, I'm a fan.


Thanks Dave Really glad you liked the song.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Clever intro and outro.

Good and interesting write, although I have to confess I wasn't familiar with Kiribati.

Clever play on words with the title as well.

And, of course, excellent vocal and guitar work! laugh


Thanks David for checking out the song. Really glad liked it.

Originally Posted By: vicarn
Mind candy. Where am I?
Good one, Scott.

Vic


Thanks Vic. Really love the mind candy quote. For sure there is bundles of mind candy in Roberts lyrics. Stories within stories. Very cool to be a part of.

Scott Collingwood
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