Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Nice song, short and sweet! Vocals were really good, and the video was a nice complement to the lyrics. Everything worked well for me. The lyrics were mostly good with an awkward phrase here and there. It held my interest well and was short so I listened several times. Very good work overall.

Thank you for your kind comment, Rob.
If you find awkward phrases don't be shy and write what's wrong.
I'm here to learn!