TuneMonger, what a great job on this song! Good write, good story. It evokes a lot of emotion. I liked the way you song it and the electric Dreamy guitar was an excellent choice. I liked the fiddle a lot, and would have liked the steel too. Perhaps a steel playing some soft chords in other places of the song would work also, but that may make it sound more country than your shooting for. Again, great job.