Hello Bob,

In spite of your 'lack of inspiration' you surely did well on this song!
Very pleasant to listen to. And that includes the vocals of Xtina of course.

Still, I think it's a good idea to listen to the advice you've gotten on the forum.
Maybe you can also play a bit with the volume settings of the instruments during the song
That might increase the dynamics of the band too.
But without these advices your song is still enjoyable to listen to, as I said at the beginning of this post.

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130