Charlie,
I'm glad you posted this! It's great to see a BIAB user's early work with the program! It's a great song and message! Enjoyed it!
Thanks, Torrey
Yep ... what Torrey said.
I do n';t think there's anything wrong with it as is. I don't think you need to change a thing. the spoke part was a very pleasant surprise.
I strated out with version 11.5 in 2011. It;'s come a long way since. But those initial RTs still sound good to my ears!
Thanks for a glimpse back down your musical journey.
Alan