Jim, this is your best to date! Great lyrics and vocals!

I do agree that it is a little to long. You have the chorus repeating six times. Eliminating the choruses before to and after the first solo might work. Then either eliminate the chorus just prior to the second solo or eliminate the solo and the last chorus. Off course this is just my opinion and I do like it as is.


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