Originally Posted By: tommyad
Marty, That's a good one. Very well sung and Dave's guitar work is excellent . Great tone. I was getting a 60's English vibe from this and odd as it sounds the melody reminded me of Mama Cass. Cool lyrics and I engaged all the way. Bravo, Tom

Thanks, Tom. Yeah, I probably can't shake that 60s thing. Although I survived the invasion, I think I've played every Beatle song ever written. But Mama Cass? Yeah, I hear what you're saying. Sounds like a melody she'd sing.

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Marty,

A great message!
It should always be "for yourself" first. And a Big Hit once the world hears it smile

Well sung. An infectious melody.

Good Bass (of course).
Dave shines - as always.

Excellent mix.

Stuck in my head now...

fj

Thanks, Floyd. I used to pitch songs in the 90s, and realized too many producers owed too many favors to too many others to even consider my songs. Then realized I wasn't really doing it for them. I'm doing it because I can't help it. Glad you like the melody. If it's stuck in your head, it's bound to improve.

Originally Posted By: MarioD
WOW, you two stars hit this one out of the ballpark

Fantastic vocal with great lyrics

Your vocal and bass is amazing as is Dave's always perfect guitar parts

Outstanding mix

Super groove


Haha, Mario. Start at the stars, right? Everyone on this forum is a star --a beacon to show the way. So glad you like it, and thanks for all your inspiration.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
As floyd jane said, great message, excellent guitar.

And a good, catchy song to boot! laugh

Thanks, David. Yeah, this message is one we in this forum all know so well. The meaning of life is to create.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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